Saturday 4 April 2015

4/30 Rachel McKibbens Exercise #4

Ingredients:

1.    Something that could be used for digging (but is not meant for) digging.
2.     A person you had almost completely forgotten about, until now.
3.     A routine chore
4.     The person, place or thing nobody warned you about.


1.     seashell
2.     Melanie (1st best friend)
3.     washing dishes

4.     time

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     While digging/scraping/carving/mining/piercing/slitting(#1), whatever, find the forgotten person(#2)inside. Discover how all that he/she does is the one chore(#3) all day long. And beautifully. Why? 

Discover the one thing they could have warned you about(#4), had you remembered them. Don't fiddle too much with details, instead, write how you live your life differently, now that you remember this person. Now that you know they knew what you didn't know, until now. Oh, and make sure you only find them once. Also, make sure you continue to try to find them again, but never do.


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Girl was seashell beach digging when Girl found her,
sand castle moat scraping
on the way to China next to the lake bed.

Girl had forgotten,
but as soon as she puffed up that breath-ful of sand,
Girl began the remembering.
She was little, with bright eyes
and soft hair and a quiet voice
that said a lot of big things.
Girl hadn’t seen her for a while.
Girl wondered where she’d gone away
so Girl started asking her questions:

Where did you come from?
Does the sand scratch your eyes?
What do you remember?
Was it cold there?

She replied:

memory and yesterday
not when I blink them real fast
only the answers
sand is warm and held me tight

Girl wanted to know so much more:

Do you have a mother?
What is the biggest number you know?
Want to play?

She answered:

everyone came from someone
I don’t think I’ve counted it yet
yes, please

So, Girl played with her all afternoon
they played with the seashells and the bright plastic buckets
and made shapes and mounds and piles
once all the sand had been wiggled around
and the shade was quieting their ratatat hearts
they sat squat at the lapping waves and washed the dishes

she was good at cleaning the buckets,
going out deep enough to avoid the sandy water,
kicked up from all their play
she swirled each basin slow to unstick the stuck bits

Girl watched careful,
Girl had never seen anyone watch dishes with such care before.
Girl’s mother would probably like her.

Just like that, Girl heard her family call
turned from the shore to see where the sound was from.
Girl looked back at her
but all Girl saw was a clean stack of seashells and bright plastic buckets
she was nowhere to be seen,
the day was done and time had passed
and Girl only had more questions:

Where does the time go?
Are you happy?
Where did you learn to wash dishes?


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